Billie

I see you ask for critique.

As I said, the immediacy is nice, and it has impact. The colors play well together. Composition is ok - nothing wrong with it but it could benefit from something to give it context. There is something not quite right with the proportion/position of each eye - one or the other. Hair could do with more 3D that is shadow and light as I can see where the light comes from by the highlights on her face, bit this is not supported by corresponding highlights and shadow in her hair on on her neck. To sum up, it really is an awesome piece, and it would be wonderful to see another attempt with this as a solid basis. I think it would look great in oils using a big brush and bold colors. The reason I am drawn to look and look at it is because it has so much potential.

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